SorrowsPename

Author: Kasper187 ASL Info:    24 m Texas Elite Ratio:    2.03 - 71 /64 /43 Words: 84

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SorrowsPename

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sorrowsPenname Sorrow is my pen name Which takes this dark life away Showing me the only way to feel Taken aback by this pain that is all too real Sorrow is my pen name Because this pain bleeds from me Like the fall of the rain And the hope that evades me Sorrow is my pen name Because this pain is all I feel Hear my words and feel the strain On my heart that is all too real...

Submitted on 2006-12-25 22:56:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I like the poetic banter you produce in this mindful conversation.

| Posted on 2006-12-27 00:00:00 | by danativ | [ Reply to This ]

this is very good. i can definalty relate to what you have wrote here. it's like finding a writing that so describes you life as it is right now. i liked it good work. joanna

| Posted on 2006-12-26 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]

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