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    dots Submission Name: Glowing Lightsdots
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    Author: Jason_Clement
    ASL Info:    17, male
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 147/149/61
    Words: 209
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 144
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    Glowing Lights
    by Jason C. Clement
    © Jason C. Clement

    Simplicity in life's simplest things,
    Still you wonder why's it so complicated?
    And you pen these songs out in souless ink,
    Leaving two-timing words abated.
    Catchy phrases and underlying metaphors,
    Life is to candle, as should be.
    Time burns, even in the winds of change,
    Leaving only the simple and crazy.

    At the end of the tunnel,
    Lies two apathetic trees;
    Swaying softly in the wind.
    Devoured so easily,
    With the lust and desire,
    Of mankind to destroy.
    These trees, they catch on fire,
    Killing an innocent boy,
    And still the crowd watches hopelessly.

    Glowing lights and mass hysteria,
    Leaves the public deaf and obliged;
    Headlines, assuring truth in media,
    No one cares about the ones who died.

    Complexity in stupid things and stupid people,
    And you wonder, how'd we end up like this?
    As you sing this song from your soul,
    The crowd stares on with blank abyss.
    Catchy phrases move and they churn,
    Just as a rose on winter's morn;
    Times change, even as the wind burns,
    Leaving only the weak and the torn.

    Wake up and see,
    The tallest trees are standing still,
    Our hearts bleed,
    Whilst we are killed.




    Submitted on 2006-12-25 23:31:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is so true Jason
    You did another brilliant Job with this one
    How in the World do you keep writing such quality tunes time and time again
    I swear you are a genious when it comes to lyrics
    What I really liked about this write is how you spoke truth that People tend to forget a Loved One once they pass on
    That to me is truly sad
    Loved Ones are always with you they live in Forever in your Heart
    I will never understand why some people find this truth so hard to comprehend
    Excellent Job Jason
    Looking forward to reading more shortly
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-12-26 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      God... at least your a good writer. They're really hard to find here.. Thankyou
    | Posted on 2006-12-27 00:00:00 | by blackbird | [ Reply to This ]



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