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    dots Submission Name: A Kind-Hearted Shortiedots
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    Author: annie smith
    ASL Info:    20/f
    Elite Ratio:    5.26 - 75/61/24
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 979
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       ***Hemm*** well this is about **cough** some one!!:P


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    dotsA Kind-Hearted Shortiedots
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    A kind-hearted shortie
    With black, curly hair
    A kind tender heart

    100 pounds
    But fiesty all the same
    A true master at retroect

    A kick ass fighter
    With an inoccent smile
    Lookes decieving strength

    A true tease at heart
    Playful but still kind
    A friend who will die for a true friend

    Dark brown shining eyes
    That hold a secret
    A friendly laugh

    Small, slender bones
    Each one a little crooked
    Just a small boned kid

    The deffinition of random
    A little ADD
    And a musicsion

    Flirty and teasing
    But too mush fun to resist
    Will do anything for a true friend




    Submitted on 2006-12-25 23:43:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Haha, I'd like to see this person, sounds cool. Shadow
    | Posted on 2007-10-28 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      nice poem i like it
    | Posted on 2007-01-05 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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