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    dots Submission Name: Headphones Vixendots
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    Author: Twisted
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 159/57/75
    Words: 234
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1146
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1498



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       The only explanation for this...filthy, filthy little tibdit is by me pleading temporary insanity...although some would argue that I'm always insane...*sighs* I'm actually happy at how this turned out, my only regret is that many will find out that I really am

    I entered this into the Making Love contest but who knows who won, I think this won because it's mine , bet you didnt see that one coming did you?

    The picture that I was going to 'include' with this submission was like rated 'R', due to exposer of breast, which mind you I drew, and don't ask about a consent form because you can just imagine who it was.

    I really think that...no, scratch that, I hope that people review, and possibly fav. but I doubt that since it's all...it sounds as though I was...(okay I probably was, if my neighboors were smoking)...horny.

    *Sighs and shrugs* But that's all irrevaltive, this is the new thing, and I'd rather have you review "Dark Midnight/Epiphany".

    Do not judge, I just want your honest opinion! Arigato!


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    dotsHeadphones Vixendots
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    Music thumps and echoes in her head,
    She recognizes the rhythmic style, the harmony, the lyrics echoed upon her walls,
    Writing over the countless already written there.
    She traces the notes on her thigh, counting the beats, and pausing at the rests,
    Her tongue fingers the ring on her bottom lip, and her hand strokes over her stomach,
    Her prized musician rests between her thighs at her womanhood.
    She takes the cord within her mouth, the music pulsing an exuberant beat,
    That causes her heart to beat faster,
    The euphoria of love-making the music causes,
    Diving below into my naked folds;
    she strokes bare flesh, to seduce the seemingly invisible lover upon her bed,
    Touch and play my wanton violin
    erotic swing of hips causes her breast to bounce free of its restraints,
    Louder and louder, the music loves me
    she lets her fair and dangerous lover take her hands away and put his own instead
    Beating and pulsing, my sex throbs
    his tongue teased her experienced flesh,
    I'm a whore for letting all these lyrics seduce me
    as his hands began a dance,
    Headphones Vixen, addicted to my many lives; my many lovers, stroke my notes, and taste my melodies
    He began to descend her restrained flesh, feel the erotic sways and skilled fingers,
    Throbbing, climax, the final notes mark against my thigh again, another lover leaves its mark on my body




    Submitted on 2006-12-26 00:01:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      DAMN!!! That is interesting. I think you should write another one.
    | Posted on 2007-02-07 00:00:00 | by Vampiric Death | [ Reply to This ]
      well i like it.... you must be a true talent.... well keep writing and ill keep reading...
    lonely
    | Posted on 2007-01-12 00:00:00 | by lonelybug | [ Reply to This ]
      this was a good write. honestly.
    | Posted on 2007-01-10 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow.

    that was a very sexual write.

    what made you write about musical masturbation? lol i like the poetic-ness of it, though. i suppose youve captured the poetry that is masturbation.

    good word choices.
    | Posted on 2007-01-10 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]
      ok just wondering were did you get that idea from
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by gloomyanddoomy | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, can u say steamy, hold on fanning myself, they was very good. i need a cold shower.
    | Posted on 2007-01-03 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      it was different. not that it wasnt good. it was just different. its not my style.it was just a little akward to read about to tell you the truth. the flow is good and all and the use of word was very nice. it was a little confusing and all but it was well done. it was kinda fun to read and i enjoyed reading it!
    srry for being so negative!
    ~annie
    | Posted on 2006-12-26 00:00:00 | by annie smith | [ Reply to This ]
      wwooww is all I can say to that! well done :)
    | Posted on 2006-12-26 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ]


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