Description: I beleive in most of the relationships I am in (wether it be by friends or something more Romantic) I am blessed to have such wonderful people who love me..but out off all of them there is one person who chose me to be his even though he has seen me in my good times and well as the bad ones. Now thats what I call Love :).
Your First Choice -------------------------------------------
I stood in that vally
Which you've been before
As I lay in a slumber
on your bedroom floor
I glance over my shoulder
And found your familiar face
one that smiled
gave me his embrase
He looked so innocent
As he took my hand
We changed into children
Then quickly we ran
To the mountain of lost dreams
Where all is at home
He then turned and reminded
"You've faced it alone."
He pulled me a little farther
Down to a giant tree
Whose branches where broken
By the storm within me
He pulled me to his chest
cause this was the place
I used to find rest
now shame covered my face
He then sweeped me up
In his soft, sweet, arms
Then sturnly proclaimed
"Now I'll keep you from harm."
Then he carried me to a sea
and a sandy white beach
Where the waves danced
So swift and free
He sat us both down
then looked in my eyes
"Look Up!" he said
"There is love in the sky!"
I looked with quickness
And awoke to your voice
then embrassed your shoulders
For I was your first choice.
Sooo sweeeet and very, very roooomantic, indeed ... neatly and quite nicely done ... some nifty rhyme to be sure ... over all effect was really quite excellent! ... ( note: many typos which can be easily fixed upon a re reading -- spell check will be a very good friend to you, as it is to me! ) bravo! ... bravo! ... bravo! ... Michael
Submission Name: Your First Choice
