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    dots Submission Name: Merry Christmasdots
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    Author: rawpot
    ASL Info:    24/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 383/256/84
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Rant/Comedy
    Total Views: 698
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    Bytes: 739



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    dotsMerry Christmasdots
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    Stupid...

    ah, I yelling at you all,
    I am freaking stupidly smart,

    Laughing anything I ought find stupid...

    Merry Christmas to you all,

    My business is blooming,
    Cause you all are buying in it,

    Santa, oh stupid santa,
    A-holes dressed up like Santa,

    Making such a stupid site..

    I heard a joke, it said,

    One stupid blond, one smart blond and a santa,
    played poker and you know what,
    The stupid blond won..

    Well because, you all are told,
    The other two dont exist...

    Funny as crap on freezer...

    Wish you all a merry christmas...




    Submitted on 2006-12-27 11:28:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well despite the fact that you dont care what i think, your always entitled to your opinion. Even if you personally hate santa, (which i never rly think about him, i more so think about jesus's birth but im a christian...) there are smart blondes out there. Its funny how you stereotype others when you probably experienced them as well. Ah well, interesting write i suppose, just dont understand what ur trying to get out of it. The right to gloat? The right to make others feel stupid? well I don't think you have succeded with that last one there. Ranting in a post and not caring what other people right back is foolish. I mean thats what a journal entry is for right?

    to be politically correct, HAPPY HOLIDAYS! : )
    | Posted on 2006-12-27 00:00:00 | by Jan | [ Reply to This ]


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