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    dots Submission Name: Eight Beautiful Timesdots
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    Author: navarro1991
    ASL Info:    16/f/seguin
    Elite Ratio:    1.4 - 0/2/16
    Words: 366
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 794
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsEight Beautiful Timesdots
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    I stroll away with my problems with a knife
    I cut until I see myself bleed
    The reasons why
    I canít say
    Because you wouldnít care anyways
    It came down to this
    Cutting my wrist
    Itís plain to see
    What I need
    But the world doesnít see
    Only what they thought was me
    Iím not crazy
    But insane
    For I've gone beyond a madman himself
    And Iím willing to die
    For the slightest outcast of life
    Iím the outsider of outcast
    But youíll hear my voice at last
    When indeed youíll see
    My sorrows for eternity
    For eight times Iíve strike in plain sight
    No one noticed for their sight needs to be restored
    My cries for help they didnít hear
    Or should I say out of fear
    That I might turn on them
    To scared to be blamed
    Realizing that no matter what
    They care not that I cut
    For Iíve done it eight times
    And from them not a single line
    Eight beautiful times
    Not paid for not even a dime
    They have the nerve to ask my why
    The only reply is I want to die
    Thinking Iíll stop this torment
    But this is my payment
    To this cruel thing they call life
    But that it all came down to a knife
    Why is that they scream
    Why to rest for eternity
    For eight beautiful times
    Iíve strike in plain day light
    Itís hard for you to believe
    What you see
    But what can I say
    You wouldnít believe me anyway
    Iíve tired to tell you more than one time
    But you thought I lie
    No truth did you see
    The words that came out of me
    But like I said my debt did I paid
    By the drops of blood and my tears of flood
    You still donít care
    So to the world will I share?
    The secret that lie within
    From the beginning to the end
    My ungrateful sin
    For here I bend
    Let everyone hear
    Even if they donít care
    Itís something theyíll bare and leave with blank stares




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