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    dots Submission Name: River of Sorrowdots

    Author: navarro1991
    ASL Info:    16/f/seguin
    Elite Ratio:    1.4 - 0/2/16
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsRiver of Sorrowdots

    Thereís not a day that went by
    That I didnít cry
    Why should I lie?
    I just want it to be
    You and Me
    Just like it used to be
    I use to think we were unique
    But now I know we were just weak
    Now I grab a knife
    And I slice and dice
    I cut trough my flesh
    Unlike the rest
    Itís not to please me
    Itís to set me free
    Baby where did you go
    This isnít a show
    You just canít up and leave
    When you please
    I know you want to be free
    But what about me
    Why did you leave?
    You canít do this to me
    When I realized you werenít coming back
    My heart went cold and my soul went back
    My whole life went off track
    There was too much to lack
    My whole life turned upside down in a half a minute flat
    You werenít just gone
    You took most of me a long
    What did I do wrong?
    Why did you go?
    You know this isnít a show
    So what happed to the love that once flowed?
    There is nothing I could do
    To prove to you
    That Iím sinking in a river full of sorrow
    Nothing I do will heal tomorrow
    Unless I have you
    Than at least I could me true
    To my hear at last
    No longer loveís outcast

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