I was just going through your work, and at first it didn't really hit me..and I wasn't understanding some of the stuff..but man a month can make a change to everything. you truly have a gift..you should publish..I feel so much better now that I view everything different, more clear. you are something else..
"so often the crushing of the velvet morning is like a smoothe breath over a frozen puzzle"
I love this line - it gave me goosebumps!
Beautiful imagery. Your metaphors are really fresh and unique - not a cliché to be found. I feel like there's a hidden meaning that I'm just not catching. But I guess you don't have to fully understand something to appreciate its beauty, huh? Anyway, very well done!