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the moonlit caves
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inner workings of my youth
the moonlit caves
small leaves be the death of me
my mind transcends the useless river
only oracles and miracles adorn my early years
i am the maddening of many retreating lakes
even truth invested gains a loss no other face resembles
i am but the recipient of many vast equilibriums
so many voices reap the afternoon rewards
and still we're only a graveyard away from yesterday
loose gravel makes a mockery of mystics
hammering away at the cherokee moon
drifting on the wind like vahalla's candle
all of this and even more unseen
is the stillness of the empty marshes breathing
i ask you this
where do all the seconds go?
do they vanish, or do we store them in our thoughts forever?
like an apple or a flower turned inward like a child
Submitted on 2006-12-27 16:00:48
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mmmm.... a desert of imagery
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