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    dots Submission Name: Peopledots
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    Author: D.C.M.
    ASL Info:    18/M/TN.
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 73/107/71
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPeopledots
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    People, people all around.
    Where can they not be found?
    Inside minds they do exist.
    Outside buildings they walk on by.
    Inside love they do remain.
    Outside life they do substaine
    Within my pain, they go away.
    Inside my blood they can not stay.
    Inside my soul they dare not lay.
    What happens now?
    I’m all alone.
    Dead.




    Submitted on 2006-12-27 20:18:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      aww. this is so sad. i definately know how you feel on this one. good write.

    black rose
    | Posted on 2007-05-12 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]
      most people are stupid, selfish, mean and cruel. if you put your faith or trust in people you will be disappointed! take your time and try to find the few true souls there are in this world and make them your friends. forget acquaintences, they will only use you and nobody wants to be used and thrown away like yesterday's trash. we all feel alone at times...it's those times that define who we are. i wish you well in dealing with the people of this world...maybe you will have better experiences than i have LOL!! take care...
    | Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]
      it's how we're born into this world and how we leave, alone. death is a welcome not a good-bye. that's just my opinion though...
    | Posted on 2006-12-28 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]



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