Description: People think having a younger sister and brother is a nightmare but how would you feel if suddenly they died. i know how you feel.
I hate my brother and deep down i don't care what happens to him but no matter how hard you try to hate a person you love them even more.
Just reverse the situation would your brother of sister hate you just because the dressed or acted
if you only had each other would you still hate them? I wrote it to help people with what they feel for their brothers and sisters because if you didn't have any where would you be would you have been born if your parents didn't want another child or was it because your brother or sister wanted another family member to play with when they got older?
If i died tomorrow. -------------------------------------------
If i died tomorrow
would you my brother care
would you love me still the same.
If i died tomorrow
being the only girl in the house
would you be loyal and still be there.
If i died tomorrow
would you feel hurt
with me being the odd ball would you care?
If i died tomorrow
would you feel it was your fault
that you could have stopped me.
I know you love me i love you too
But look at us your an angel
and i'm a devil do you care
i don't your my brother and i'm
your sister and that i would not change.
If you were to die tomorrow i would die
with you why because i need you
to tell me what to do to teach me
love and life and how to treat mum
don't ever say i don't care i DO.
what is the big idea? well i dont know what brought this on except i have older younger and well you learn to accept hopefully that they love the best they can and sometimes someone elses inadequsies cause them to act w3eird to the ones they love or specially that love them hey i am typing fastert and the mistakes aint so bad ,wow love the poem the cause is real. luv,how much? the rivers of the world could not hold the amount of love that flows for you. and as usual the xoxoxoxoxo paulie d
The flow was a little off, but other than that it was good. I'm big on the repetition thing, so I really liked that part of it. Just try to change the flow towards the end, and it would be much better!!
i think that you need to make it flow a little better it was a little hard to read flow wise but i think that the idea behind it is great. keep working on it and it could be really awsome. good work lili
it is true, if we were to die tomorrow or someone we love/hate were to die tomorrow, what would feel different? or would it? sometimes you don't realize how much you really did care for someone until they are gone. life's too short for such petty jealousies and bullsh.it between people. i don't think you really don't care at all what happens to your brother. this poem says that much.
Submission Name: If i died tomorrow.
