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    dots Submission Name: social circusdots
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    Author: social circus
    ASL Info:    16/M/LA
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 17/57/36
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    Description:
       im insane


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    is this insanity creeping on in
    or is it an unavoidable sin

    has my my mind finally fried
    or am i just mad because you lied

    am i to dangerous to be near
    or is it just your pitiful fear

    you say i am mental and out of my mind
    but i am just looking for where the sun shined

    you call me crazy and insane
    just because i want to damage you with a crane

    insane is such a strong word
    i think looney is more prefered

    are you afraid or are you just nervous
    dont worry now im just a social circus.




    Submitted on 2006-12-28 04:55:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i know why do people think ur insane just cuz you hit em with a crane. seriously. its normal.

    anyways good poem i liked how iyt was ur name at the end.
    | Posted on 2006-12-28 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      I can relate to this poem. Anger and frustration are two great means of expression, especially when directed at someone else and not urself, ya know. Anyhoo, i like the message and the wording.
    | Posted on 2006-12-28 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]


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