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    dots Submission Name: An Equation Containing Threedots
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    Author: siroez
    ASL Info:    27/Male/WV
    Elite Ratio:    5.23 - 101/87/44
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Elation is a sense of joy and pride. Just for the readers notes I guess...



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    dotsAn Equation Containing Threedots
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    An Equation Containing Three

    I tried to imagine your face, but the splendor is to much thought for ponder. Im being pushed so far backwards that I might as well bend over. Im baffled inside of myself, and lost within a mentation of who I could have been. Studying the sense of elation between the two, only to think of what it could take to win. Defeated by myself because of the unknown. A third, the future, stepping out into the bold. The measurements of the three, so contingent, that they should not be. Reminding me of a continuous hourglass, that will never agree. Showing that time is the only conclusion and solution to the scars that can never be healed. All Though I may dismay I carry on knowing that you soon too should be revealed.




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