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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 839
    Average Vote:    2.0000
    Bytes: 234



    Description:
       I Dont Know What This Is But Yea Tell me Wat You Think


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    One Day Like Another
    In This Never Ending Nightmare
    Everythings The Same
    I Face It With A Blank Stare
    Nothing Ever Changes
    Repeating Day After Day
    Trapped In A Re Run
    Ill Never Get Away




    Submitted on 2006-12-28 20:50:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ooooh nice style here but it would be cool if it was a little longer sorry i like to read lol
    | Posted on 2007-03-23 00:00:00 | by Cara R.D | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this one a lot better. It's short, sweet and to the point. It's not hard to understand and it's relatable. Good Job.
    | Posted on 2007-02-01 00:00:00 | by numbertwenty | [ Reply to This ]
      This is good. A great short piece of writing. Well done!

    Keep up the great work.

    peace.
    -Kamerin
    | Posted on 2007-01-13 00:00:00 | by Kamerin Brown | [ Reply to This ]
      huh preatty cool write sounds deep I dont think I could of said something like that good job, ty
    | Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      thats so true for me! props for putting it in words
    nice...capitals?
    hahaha dont let being emo get you down
    | Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by im2emo4you | [ Reply to This ]
      wats up beautiful thats was nice and smooth
    sometimes i feel the same but i fight every day for a better day. keep your head up let no one the [censored] or get you down
    | Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by Sambentley | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked it. . Good job m8
    | Posted on 2006-12-28 00:00:00 | by MoonLightaFoot | [ Reply to This ]
      i think we all feel that wa sometimes.
    its like that world is in a loop adn theres no chance for anysort of change.
    but eventually a change will come whether bad or good. soemthing will come along.
    i know exactly how that feels.
    btw, good poem!
    peace
    ~Erin
    | Posted on 2006-12-28 00:00:00 | by emb_er77 | [ Reply to This ]
      I think you are emo! :) but nice rhyming! :)
    | Posted on 2006-12-28 00:00:00 | by kurdy | [ Reply to This ]


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