Always we will find in you
The comfort of a friend.
May you find it in us too,
Until the very end
Anyone with eyes can see
Just how lucky that we are.
None however, get to know
The love shared in our hearts.
Distance often separates
This friendship of ours.
And till the next time that we meet
Just read this to pass the hours.
| Haha, it's funny, because before I even read the previous comment, I was thinking along the same lines, "Hallmark Card". Haha. And also somewhat cliché, but you know, it's very universal. So universal things can oftentimes be cliché when presented in popular form, you know? But cliché or not, if it came from the heart for a dear friend, it's still special. I checked it for meter and everything, and there are a few spots where you have to kind of change it in your mind for it to work. But maybe it's just me. :-)|
|| Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by LucyDiamond | [ Reply to This ] || I have two words.|
Send it in, you'll make mad cash. It's really good in a card. And clever. That's the only place I can imagine reading it. In a card. hah, nice.
Don't take this as like, a put down.
It's just really cliché.
I should probably read some of your other stuff before I said that, it could just be because it's for a friend. No idea.
But she'll be happy. And since that's your purpose, awesome, congrats. LoL.
|| Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by Secrets Unheard | [ Reply to This ] |