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    dots Submission Name: Hollywood Showdots
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    Author: Jason_Clement
    ASL Info:    17, male
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 147/149/61
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 143
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsHollywood Showdots
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    Hollywood Show
    by Jason C. Clement
    © Jason C. Clement

    Been looking out the window too long,
    These curtains are beginning to look,
    Almost as if they had faces;
    Lines in the shadows are making me believe,
    That someone is watching me,
    And for once, I'd rather trade places.

    Sad and sorrowful expectations,
    Delayed revelations,
    "I'm so sorry," confrontations.

    I think that if I leave this hate,
    I won't find anywhere else to go;
    And where's a soul to resonate?
    When life is like a hollywood show.

    Been looking at my hands too long,
    They're starting to look rather thin,
    Like a midnight tramp on a dead end street.
    All my words are overrated and hollow,
    Makes me think and reflect upon,
    And eventually admit defeat.

    Cold and heartless love,
    No God above,
    "Fuck you," push and shove.

    I think that if I leave this hate,
    I won't find anywhere else to go;
    And where's a soul to resonate?
    When life is like a hollywood show.




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      Jason
    BRAVO
    Another Fantastic Write by you
    In this write I believe you are speaking of someone who is living a life that just dosent seem real
    They are living a life that is make believe and they have lost touch with reality
    You really did an excellent job with this
    This write flows beautifully and I can see it beeing sung in a slow rock kind of way
    I here the instruments in the back round reading this
    Excellent Job!!!
    I miss talking to you
    I am back in home in New Jersey now
    Please keep in touch!!!
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      You really know how to make me feel what your feeling...Sad & sorroful expectations,Delayed Revelations, "I'm so sorry", confrontations".
    You've got alot going for you by the looks of it. Keep playing the guitar too, maybe i'll hear some of your songs on the radio some day.
    | Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by Sheli Bee | [ Reply to This ]
      Hollywood Shows! That just says too much about the cliché of people believing that everything should end happily ever after. Technically, it should, but that's only technically.
    I have to say, this stanza really sums up the entire song too well,

    I think that if I leave this hate,
    I won't find anywhere else to go;
    And where's a soul to resonate?
    When life is like a hollywood show.


    Life isn't always as we wish it to be, and probably won't be, once again you make good your talent as a songwriter, do get this on your myspace soon so I can listen to it.
    Cheers! and happy new year!
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]



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