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    dots Submission Name: Long To Be Desireddots

    Author: forevermortal
    ASL Info:    31/F/Home
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/2/6
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsLong To Be Desireddots

    Long to be desired
    To be like many that are loved and admired
    Be more than just ...
    If only I could be something that someone would lust
    To feel the touch of sexual pleasure
    To feel a love that could share such a treasure
    If only I could be seen as the beautiful
    And have the fire that is so plentiful
    To be like I once was in my younger day
    Maybe then someone would walk up my way

    To have lost the respect
    From what I see in the mirror and in what it has to reflect
    It don't seem fair what time can change
    How it effects the body, mind, and soul to rearange
    At the age of 31, I have seen much loss
    And in a hard life many narrow roads I alone have come across
    The hard times have shown their hate
    In my eyes, my face, and my fate

    I walk alone to just be turned away
    Push aside as they do what they may

    Submitted on 2006-12-29 10:31:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very good, well written piece on the effects and craving of the emotion longing, really speaks to me, feel the raw pain of longing, oh if we could all only truly hold what we desire,that would be fantastic. excellently done~favin this
    keep it up and welcome to Elite! :)
    | Posted on 2006-12-30 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ]

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