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Author: Jose Ragnos
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You know something, i've been thinking,
Mainly about my high school life so far.
Your 12 years of school go as quickly as blinking,
Yet, sometimes it feels like you're burned with tar.

When you were young you get out at noon,
Now that you're done you feel like its forever.
You think to yourself "Will school be done soon?"
Sometimes your brain will fail in that endeavor.

Don't rush to get it done for you now have college,
And there the teachers don't care if you're there.
Your brain will be loaded with wisdom and knowlege,
Or at the soriority party drunk and taking a dare.

Who knows what may happen when you are threw,
But when you see the price tag you'll go blue.

Submitted on 2006-12-29 14:56:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  very creative and funny.

''when you see the price tag you'll go blue.''

its true though,thats why im joining the army national guard.i dont have money like that so someone else can pay for it.wanting to have a successful life is very hard and difficult.thanks for bringing it to my attention.your poem is neat.
| Posted on 2006-12-30 00:00:00 | by vlarrimore | [ Reply to This ]

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