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    dots Submission Name: Caged Insidedots
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    Author: Kimmy
    ASL Info:    18/f/Ar
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 18/32/20
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       just feeling like either way i went, i couldnt get out..


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    dotsCaged Insidedots
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    Caged inside,
    Away from it all,
    200 ft high are my walls
    Climbing up isnít easy as I thought
    But falling, seems to be so simple
    I listen to everyone's complaints,
    I feel the uselessness of knowing nothing
    And how secure others feel when they seem to know everything,
    They seem to be the ones that climb out so easy
    And Iím still staring up
    Waiting for a rope

    Carry me up, climb me out,
    Just let me out
    I donít want to be an animal you can keep
    I want to be free
    Free from you,
    Free from myself,
    Free from Everyone...





    Submitted on 2006-12-29 16:05:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i know how you feel on this one. I, myself, feel seperated from other's by my insecurites and things of that sort. I often envy those who are "free", as you say, and are able to have so much confidence in themselves. I thought you were able to capture somthing i have been feeling lately and you did an awsome job. I don't really have any critiques, i suck at them.lol
    | Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by robertbwell | [ Reply to This ]
      
    | Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by robertbwell | [ Reply to This ]


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