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    dots Submission Name: lyfedots
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    Author: bettybabe13
    ASL Info:    14/f/az
    Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 1/1/5
    Words: 316
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 49
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    Bytes: 1561



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       wat ive been through


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    my lyfe has been pretty crazy lately.i cant deal with all the pressure from people around me. my dad has been taken over by my step mom. he noe longer tells me and my sister wat to do. its always "go ask angela." my stepmom i cant stand. she has been in my lyfe for about 4 yrs now and it doesnt look like shes leaving anytyme soon. my sister lives with me now which is really good. i love her a lot. my friends dont accept the person that i am and who i wanna be. but i dont mind them, if they dont support my decisions then they're not true friends. my mom really is my world rite now. shes all im going on. even though she may not agree with everything that i want i noe she does it outta care. i noe that i have people who love me but its hard dealing with everything. i guess that oe one really will eer understand my lyfe. but then again wat any one person understands or noes exactly wat another person is going through? they dont. ive gone through a lot of hard tymes in my lyfe. ive learned to deal with them though. im judged becuz im a half breed and cuz they dont believe i grew up in one of the worst places. ive been put in a foster care center. my mom got arressted in front of me. my aunt who was like a second mom pasted away about 2 yrs ago. i have noe freedom at my house. cant go anywhere or just to hang out with some friends. its always well noe unless trishas going with you. i love trish but shes not my only friend. i cant even chill with my closest guy friend. but wateva im outta that house in less than about 4-5 yrs.




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      I think that I can definitely relate to you, however, was this to accomplish any writing style? Because I felt that you could have really poored your emotion out a lot more by adding metaphors, straight forward thoughts, something deep, rather than on-the-surface desription. I enjoyed though,

    Thanks,
    Chris.
    | Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by cbm332003 | [ Reply to This ]



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