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    dots Submission Name: Not good enoughdots
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    Author: bleeding_sin
    ASL Info:    16/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 54/68/57
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 537
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 865



    Description:
       I will not change myself for no one. i have learned that. A guy broke my heart and I just want to be with him. And I though if I changed myself he will love me. Well no guy inthe world is worth changing myself. 2/27/06


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    dotsNot good enoughdots
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    Never good enough
    Alwasys second best
    Pushed away to the side
    Can't I just die

    It would be better than this life
    Where fellings show on our sleeves
    And when not good enough
    Fall away to nothing

    I am one of nothing
    To fat
    To ugly
    Nver good enough

    Tell how i can change myslef
    To make me better
    And able to love
    Not the person I am

    I'll modify myslef
    To there opinion of right
    And when that doesn't work
    I'll be good enough

    I'll try and never give up
    Make them happy
    And be excepted by all
    I'm done being me

    I'm never good enough
    Always second best
    Pushed away to the side
    Until I change myself




    Submitted on 2006-12-29 23:17:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I've very glad you wrote this, because when the poem is this deep, and this emotional, it doesn't matter if it's not Shakespeare, because it means something that is primal and real and I loved reading it. I could really connect with it because I have felt the way you felt, and have tried to change myself. But the fact that you're writing something like this really makes you stand out, and in a very very good way.
    | Posted on 2006-12-31 00:00:00 | by A.L. Beirce | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem, you've reached a part of me that feels like I'm not good enough. I may not be fat and ugly, but I have my own short commings, I'm told I don't look my age and yet I'm still single. Anyway I've learned that if what (they) say isn't written in stone then it dosen't matter... You just keep own keeping own.
    I know this poem has come from somewhere deep and painful and I glad it spiled out through your pen. It is from our emotions and dreams that gives a poet the power to push a pen.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2006-12-30 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      I know how this feels. It's a very powerful and moving poem. There is some grammar error but besides that I loved it. Very sad but true...


    Ciao,

    }i{Renae}i{
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by Poetic_tragedy6 | [ Reply to This ]


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