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    Author: crazy_83
    ASL Info:    28/f/mo
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 27/29/18
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    you left me standing at the door of truth
    i fall to my knees and cover my eyes
    passion is dripping from the breaks in my heart
    can you help me find my way
    it seems i took so many wrong turns
    that there is no way out
    every way i look all i see is more pain
    all there is are more lies and deciet
    temptation whispering at my back






    Submitted on 2006-12-30 00:23:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i'm not sure what this is about but it has good imagery.
    | Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]


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