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    dots Submission Name: Baby Pleasedots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 557
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 561



    Description:
       This Poem Is Dedicated To my Bf James
    Maybe One Day You Will Realise Im here For You And I wanna Know Wat Goes On In you Life And When your Ready To Talk I Want you To Know Ill Alwaiiz Be Here To Listen


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    dotsBaby Pleasedots
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    maybe your eyes shine when your sad
    not with courage but with tears
    and maybe you really do have pain
    dark secrets and undried tears
    but why wont you confide in me
    y wont you tell me your hates and fears
    why wont you let me help when you are shattered
    when you fall and crash
    i care for you deeply and you know thats true
    i just want to help when youre on your own
    i want to be your light and guide you through the storm
    coz i cant stand seeing you sad when you sit there on your own




    Submitted on 2006-12-30 05:20:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i totally know wat u mean. it seems that the ones we love most hurt us the most without even meaning it.
    | Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]


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