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Author: usglen
ASL Info:    60-Male-Garden Grove,CA
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Words: 26
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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An acrostic poem dealing with the letterse in the word evil. This I wrote several yeaers ago.



Everybody gets involved in evil doings.
Very bad evil doings are wrong
Indeed they are wrong
Life has people that do evil things

Submitted on 2006-12-30 13:36:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  people do evil things. aNd they are wrong.

goodness in a simple poem yo.
| Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
  you just said the same thing over and over.
that didn't say too much about "evil"
| Posted on 2006-12-30 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]

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