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    dots Submission Name: to many questions, less actionsdots
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    Author: social circus
    ASL Info:    16/M/LA
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 17/57/36
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 526
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    Bytes: 661



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    are you thinking about what to do next
    are you going to kiss her
    are you going to leave
    are you going to just stare

    what is on your mind now whats holding you back
    are you scared
    is it not the right time
    is your thoughts blocking your actions

    if you do kiss her what to do after
    are you going to leave
    is she going to ask you to come in her house
    will you fall in love

    if you fall in love what will happen then
    will you get married
    will you have kids
    will you cheat on her and screw it all up

    stop thinking just act.




    Submitted on 2006-12-30 18:31:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice. we're all like that. we think about the things we want to do, but chicken out and never do them.
    | Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]


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