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    dots Submission Name: Save Man ?dots
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    Author: djtswing
    Elite Ratio:    5.08 - 84/87/71
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    dotsSave Man ?dots
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    A boney beast enters the throne room,
    dodging light as light itself is his doom.
    "Stand aside, you, this shall not take long."
    I drew my blade, stared at the beast,
    "Former brother, leave, you are in the wrong."
    The Father bid me to stand down,
    and unwillingly I lowered my blade.
    "Hello, 'King', haha, Your children are mine !"
    The Father stands, lets His glory shine,
    "Fallen angel, you have no power over Me."
    The fiend cowers from the light and speaks,
    "You, maybe not, Your 'sons' we shall see."
    I stood there pitying my once glorious friend.
    He was our greatest angel, Lucifer.
    Pride was his downfall, I'm sure.
    The fiend, lurking in the small shadow, fled.
    How could my Father be so calm ?
    He was a traitor and should be punished.
    The Father was obviously in control,
    however, the beast did have his own hold.
    I don't understand my Father's choice,
    but to send His Son, why not use His voice ?
    I was sent to make it known,
    Jesus is Lord and His own.
    Though I don't understand His plan,
    I trust His knowledge and power,
    and the mercies He shall shower.
    I still wonder, why save man ?




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