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Submission Name:
Tiger Lily
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Author:
roxygirl239
ASL Info:
14/f/VA
Elite Ratio:
3.39 - 450/305/44
Words:
39
Class/Type:
Poetry/Misc
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1449
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Description:
I know this is so stupid. It just kinda popped into my head. Tiger lillies are my favorite flowers. This piece kind of explains why there are no such things as "lion Lillies" lol
Tiger Lily
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Tiger Lily
Ferocious orange cat
Skulking the streets
Maybe catching some mice
(Or a butterfly)
Not the king
Of the Jungle
Only the brilliant
Mastermind
Prowl the night
Fierce tiger
We all know
You'll outsmart
The dandelion
Submitted on 2004-06-02 18:58:41
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This is realy cute. It's a great tribute to a cat. It reminds me of the several orange cats that I've had. I loved the last stanza.
| Posted on 2004-06-02 00:00:00 | by
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this is cute i liked it...silly ...i
...that pop up window curses me...i will have my revenge...anywho..lol...lack of sleep...smiles ange
| Posted on 2004-06-02 00:00:00 | by
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