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    dots Submission Name: Tiger Lilydots
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    Author: roxygirl239
    ASL Info:    14/f/VA
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 450/305/44
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1449
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 334



    Description:
       I know this is so stupid. It just kinda popped into my head. Tiger lillies are my favorite flowers. This piece kind of explains why there are no such things as "lion Lillies" lol


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    dotsTiger Lilydots
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    Tiger Lily
    Ferocious orange cat
    Skulking the streets
    Maybe catching some mice
    (Or a butterfly)

    Not the king
    Of the Jungle
    Only the brilliant
    Mastermind

    Prowl the night
    Fierce tiger
    We all know
    You'll outsmart
    The dandelion




    Submitted on 2004-06-02 18:58:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is realy cute. It's a great tribute to a cat. It reminds me of the several orange cats that I've had. I loved the last stanza.
    | Posted on 2004-06-02 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      this is cute i liked it...silly ...i ...that pop up window curses me...i will have my revenge...anywho..lol...lack of sleep...smiles ange
    | Posted on 2004-06-02 00:00:00 | by purplesun24 | [ Reply to This ]


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