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    dots Submission Name: ~Nebulas and Novas~dots
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    Author: Tonya V.
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 158/118/32
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       written on 02/04/05.
    I was simply caught off guard one day when I realized how lucky I was....


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    dots~Nebulas and Novas~dots
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    Somedays I can fathom
    Comets' tails and wind;
    Nebulas and Novas,
    Angels on a pin;
    Genies granting wishes,
    Fortunes being told;
    Heaven showing glimses,
    Children growing old;
    Symphonies and emeralds,
    Snow and autumn leaves;
    Blossoms, wine and kisses,
    Dreams and memories;
    Miracles and potions,
    Tradgedies and fears;
    Tears begot by laughter,
    Smiles begot by tears.
    But I cannot fathom
    How it came to be
    Love beyond my merrit
    Was divined on me.




    Submitted on 2006-12-31 14:37:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A good read.It flows well and is nicely balanced.The only thing that really let's it down are the spelling mistakes.(Hate to be picky but that's always offputting).Not sure what <Angels on a pin> means either.Care to explain?My favourite part are the lines <Tears begot by laughter,Smiles begot by tears>-very effective.
    Cheers
    A.C
    | Posted on 2006-12-31 00:00:00 | by Asakura Cowboy | [ Reply to This ]



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