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    dots Submission Name: Unharvesteddots
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    Author: Suffer Well
    ASL Info:    36/F/East Coast
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 53/51/32
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsUnharvesteddots
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    Prepared like spring's renewed earth
    Rocks were cleared and dirt turned.

    Seeds were planted by and by
    Waiting for that spark of life.

    Watered, cared for tenderly
    The sprouts of love became to be.

    Cherished, fed and doted on
    As to the sky this love did grow

    Fruit the goal and wanted glee
    Large and ripe taste inviting

    Left to rot.....

    Lust inciting




    Submitted on 2006-12-31 15:01:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A very nice poem leading me to think that there is a women who once had a lover who left her, and she kept herself only for this one man who would never return, only to die alone.

    That's how I read it. Nice work...

    :))

    | Posted on 2007-01-02 00:00:00 | by Ravensworth | [ Reply to This ]


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