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    dots Submission Name: Remember Tomorrowdots
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    Author: ultimitloozer
    ASL Info:    38/M/Mesa, AZ
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 8/9/5
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsRemember Tomorrowdots
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    I cannot see the past
    it is lost in shadows
    Yet I can still remember
    all of my tomorrows
    The fairy tales of childhood
    are seen through the grimy windows of time
    Yet I can see with clarity
    all of my future sorrows
    The dreams of my youth
    reflected in tarnished mirrors;
    lofty goals never to be attained

    Yesterday is just a dream
    Tomorrow is only a memory




    Submitted on 2006-12-31 15:49:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a really interesting way of thinking about time...But I know what you mean because you remember all the times you think about tomorrows...and you dream about things you've done in the past...really smart of you to think about that...kisses~Ashley~
    | Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by redeemer | [ Reply to This ]
      definetly thought provoking i really like it. especially this part: Yesterday is just a dream
    Tomorrow is only a memory...

    hope to hear from you soon,
    marie
    | Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by boo boo | [ Reply to This ]


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