What am i to do?
In your face i'll slam the door.
When did love enter into the mix?
You said you would have forever to wait.
When will you get the hint "never Again"?
It was..Indeed different. I thought it would have been better if it were counting down from ten if you know what I mean. Mind you, the rhyming and the whole scheme of the piece would be off. I think I just like the thought of counting down. Appropriate for the New Year.
This was different, but it was good the only thing i i saw wrong was in ln4 "In your face i'll slam the door." you should put a comma in between face and slam or move "i'll slam the door." down beneath it. other than that it was good. hope to hear from you.