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    dots Submission Name: Age is Just Another Numberdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 487
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    Description:
       I love an older guy <3


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    dotsAge is Just Another Numberdots
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    How can this be?
    What does it mean?
    You hold my hand
    Make me feel wanted
    Like you want to be my man
    So I take your lead
    On this dance you put me in
    The look in your eyes, it's all I need
    They say it's wrong
    Your much too old
    And the feelings I have for you
    Are clearly written bold
    I can't get you out of my mind
    I remember you touch, your smell
    Oh how I wish you could be mine
    But everyone says no
    "You can't be with him"
    For loving an older man
    Is another proven a sin
    I can't help myself
    You know the true me
    The ugly, raw part
    I can't let people to see
    Age is just a number
    Donít you understand?
    What can I do?
    I care about the man!
    Does he care back?
    The is no way to know!
    For when I am around
    His thoughts donít show
    So I guess Iím left to wonder
    Waiting and wanting
    For someone Iím not suppose to have
    What do I do?!
    Iím so lost!
    Alone and confused
    Age is just another number
    Donít you understand?
    What am I suppose to do?
    When I care about an older man!




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    ||| Comments |||
      i guess you better hope your a good judge of intentions,
    its all instinct and nature, but would he only desire the fruit, i guess only you could know.
    | Posted on 2007-01-06 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      I know what you are talking about. I am in a relationship with someone who is twice my age.
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      I know how you feel... In fact... this sounds just like me...
    | Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngelKat | [ Reply to This ]


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