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    dots Submission Name: New Year Poemdots

    Author: Akili
    Elite Ratio:    2.36 - 915/400/60
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       just some random things I write in under 20 mins with the thought of New Year on my mind

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    dotsNew Year Poemdots

    Hereís another year gone by
    We watched it go without a cry.
    Letís raise our glasses and toast
    Maybe just get drunk and say that tonightís just a bore.

    Letís drink to friends and family
    To lives gained and ones lost.
    Let us recall what has gone by
    What we wish for and what will come.

    Hereís to things I never wanted
    To things loved and those hated.
    Raise the glasses against the world
    Forget how fast time is going by.

    Letís make a promise
    Thatíll never last.
    But isnít that half the fun?

    Letís let go of the rules for a night
    Forget that time is still going by.

    Hereís to the songs never sung
    The girls never asked for.
    A toast and drink to fantasy
    To hobbits and elves
    Bad fanfiction and to those things which
    Made us laugh a year before.

    So here is the toast to a new year
    One with surprise, great and small
    To a world still large.

    Submitted on 2006-12-31 20:51:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      haha cute poem...there are some weird awkward spots where the flow isnt perfect, but otherwise great job. a true outlook on hat new years is about!
    Write on,
    | Posted on 2007-01-21 00:00:00 | by EmeRalDEyeZ5491 | [ Reply to This ]
      Here here. A new year...the old has come and gone. This sucks. Another year of the same old same old to look forward to.

    I hope you come home for a visit soon. I flippin' miss you and so does the rest of the group.

    *Tackle hugs*

    I hope your new year is wonderful.
    | Posted on 2007-01-20 00:00:00 | by Krazy | [ Reply to This ]

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