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    dots Submission Name: We love dem hoesdots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 725
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1217



    Description:
       just messing around seeing what else i can write. I know im going to get alot of bad comments but i really don't care.


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    dotsWe love dem hoesdots
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    Look at dem eyez
    you look at her
    and think that she couldn't tell us a lie
    she looks so innocent
    dresses so sophisticated

    Yea 5'4 ní stacked
    when she walk by u canít help yourself,
    but to give her bottom a smack, smack
    we wonít give up in till one of us gets a lil' snack.
    These girls Already have there kitchen open for Pimps ní Macís
    We parting in till 3 in da morning

    She better watch where she swinging dem hips.
    I can only imagine the way she sucks dem finger tips,
    brought her to my room and showed her some tips
    but to my surprise she a freak wit experience
    when she got on top
    and how da way she moved her hips.

    She look at you wit those beautiful blue eyez
    that innocent look is a such a good disguise
    You swear ur hypnotizes
    we yall swear we'll do anything just to get between them thighs

    Never seen a girl so fly
    Not going to lie
    I already got a girl
    just looking to fit your glove
    u waking up in da morning
    feeling like a whole new girl
    in a whole new better world




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    ||| Comments |||
      This is very interesting. yes, very interesting. I'm trying to get my boyfriend to read it right now, but he has to do his "homework" so he's not looking at my computer. But all I can say right now is that is very interesting.

    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2007-05-01 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      That was pretty good. Third verse is the best. A few mistakes, but that's it.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2007-04-28 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL...sounds like a massive case of raging testosterone! :-) Peggy
    | Posted on 2007-01-06 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      hoes hoes hoes. i love them hoes.

    jkfl

    funny poem yo
    | Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]


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