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    dots Submission Name: shane in heavendots
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    Author: social circus
    ASL Info:    16/M/LA
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 17/57/36
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Misc/Lostfriend
    Total Views: 661
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    Description:
       my best friend shane killed himself in 2004
    because his dad raped and molested him
    his father was never prosecuted.


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    dotsshane in heavendots
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    i hear him crying on the phone
    he says he wants to end his life
    i remember crying i remember praying
    i said if god is real he needs to save my friend
    i ask shane what happend
    he syas his father touch him in innapropriate ways
    shane syas he dont know what to do
    i say i dont know what to do

    he says goodbye
    i hear a gun shot
    i drop the phone
    i run to the door
    but i dont get there
    i just sit in my hallway and cry

    i stare
    i pray

    my friend just killed himself
    he ended his life
    because his father is a sick fuck
    i dont know what to do

    so i just hope that shanes in heaven




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    ||| Comments |||
      This is a stupid question is this real.
    I love it though.
    | Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by dog died | [ Reply to This ]
      Omg...
    My friend shot himself over the phone with me too.
    Dude, it totally sucks and it's amazing to see how small this world is.
    Saved.
    | Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by xgirlxbassistx | [ Reply to This ]
      you spelt say's wrong every time
    i love it through
    | Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by gloomyanddoomy | [ Reply to This ]


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