The inspired addition of the final note about friends makes it less of a normal angst narrative. Overall I like it, though it is not themsot original thing I have seen. For the record: Hell has bigger things to think of.
This is really good, I like the way that at the end you made it clear that your friends were a big help to you. I really liked the form of this piece as well. Hope things get better. Great piece, keep writing.