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    dots Submission Name: So I Tell Themdots
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    Author: Versifier
    ASL Info:    18/M/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    3.23 - 89/128/39
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1137
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsSo I Tell Themdots
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    So I Tell Them

    They beg me, “Tell us something true”
    I tell them something grim
    And if there difference in the two
    I leave it up to them.




    Submitted on 2007-01-02 17:40:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Not bad, at all. I liked everything about this. The title is what brought me to read it, and the premise is interesting. It makes me think of sleepovers with my girlfriends, is that weird? Ha.

    Maybe it's about being careful what you wish for? A group of friends pry into another's life, and he tells them what they wanted to hear, but at the same time something they didn't want to hear, yes?
    | Posted on 2007-01-03 00:00:00 | by GetFighted | [ Reply to This ]


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