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    dots Submission Name: A Race Against Timedots
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    Author: mdsouza
    ASL Info:    15/F
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 161/101/20
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
    Total Views: 220
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 397



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       This poem was written when I was 8 yrs old and the poem was accompanied with a sketch.


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    dotsA Race Against Timedots
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    Oh! I want my ice-cream and cakes,
    Before the frogs come back to their lakes -
    And look at the time - it is noon
    The frogs will come back very soon.

    And then they will laugh, and laugh and laugh
    When they see me turn the cakes into half,
    Oh! look at the time - it is noon
    I've got to eat fast, the frogs will come, soon





    Submitted on 2007-01-03 05:24:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very cute and a delightful poem to read! I can picture both the cakes and the frogs plus you gobbling fast. Smiles, Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-04-03 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem shows amazing talent at only 8 years old! It's a fun poem, and I enjoyed reading it!
    | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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