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    dots Submission Name: My Guardian Angeldots
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    Author: mdsouza
    ASL Info:    15/F
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 161/101/20
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 253
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    Description:
       .. be there for me
    Right till the end.


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    dotsMy Guardian Angeldots
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    I have a friend, who's all my own,
    A model of love and loyalty
    And, me, he will never disown,
    For all eternity.

    Yes, he's my guardian angel
    Forever by my side,
    He's always there to protect me,
    To be my friend and guide.

    He's someone I can cherish and trust,
    A wondrous gift from God,
    Who comforts me and guides my footsteps
    And gently leads me onward.

    Sometimes I tend to wonder
    How I could merit such a friend,
    Who will always be there for me
    Right till the end.






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      This is something I can picture reading to my son before he goes to sleep. I liked the sing-songy rhyme and yes, Angels exist and my brother is one of my guardian angels

    Thanks Megan for sharing that!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-07-19 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      How wonderful and comforting a message you have shared in this one, Megan. I know that guardian angel is VERY proud of your poetry! Hugs, Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-06-14 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      Neat and nifty and very well done...good rhyme for the most part and good meter .... I liked this poem a whole bunch ... yesireeee ... bravo ... bravo ... bravo ... michael
    | Posted on 2007-04-06 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful piece. I have felt the significance of ur words. Excellent write!
    | Posted on 2007-03-24 00:00:00 | by Amanda_d19 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is beautiful, Megan! I believe in Angels, and I thank that if you believe in them, they will watch over you! It is especially nice to have a special Guardian Angel of your very own; one who watches over only you!
    | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw Megan thats such a cute poem !! I always like to think that i have a guardian angel watching over me, someone to lend a little helping hand now and then and to let me know im not on my own in the world. This piece is so cute and well made. Nice work ^-^

    much luv xx
    ~lou~
    | Posted on 2007-02-02 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]



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