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    dots Submission Name: A Little Time Of Prayerdots
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    Author: mdsouza
    ASL Info:    15/F
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 161/101/20
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 272
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    Description:
       For she was always there
    To give me the gift of the joy I find
    In this little time of prayer


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    I still recall, many years ago,
    Every night, my mum would sing,
    In that sweet, clear voice that I'll always know,
    And she'd never forget one thing -

    When my eyelids closed to sleep each night,
    She'd never fail to say,
    Don't sleep before you thank the Lord, alright?
    You must never forget to pray.

    And till date, these few minutes, I set apart
    To kneel down in reverence
    And there is so much gratitude in my heart
    And peace reigns in that silence.

    I realise that I have learnt so much
    In these moments that I embrace.
    The joy I feel in my heart is such
    That I have no words and am filled with praise.

    And I never forget to thank God for Mum,
    For she was always there
    To give me the gift of the joy I find
    In this little time of prayer.





    Submitted on 2007-01-03 07:37:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, this is very powerful. I like the rhythm and flow and the meaning and just all of it. You have a way with words in this piece and I especially like the last stanza. The way those three lines flow off the tounge is simply astounding.
    It feels like something you'd read/ recite over a camp fire just before you pray, but that's just me.

    Excellent job!
    /applaud.

    | Posted on 2008-01-05 00:00:00 | by Zai | [ Reply to This ]
      This is absolutely Beautiful
    My Mother is and will always be my Best Friend in this World
    She is always there to bring me a smile when Im down and guide me when I need guidance
    She is nt doing very well in her Health and recently I moved 3000 miles to live with her and return the help and Love she gave me throughout my life
    I would never ever desert her
    She is my Rock and my World
    Thank You for Sharing this
    I am making this another Favorite from you
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-11-17 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a beautiful poem Megan, and it conveys a message that all should hear! Don't ever stop praying! I'll bet your mother is very proud of you! You have a developing talent for poetry and verse that is delightful!
    | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, this is lovely, and nearly broke my heart reading it .... graceful, elegant and very, very finely done ... excellent ... superb ... bravo ... bravo ... Michael
    | Posted on 2007-01-03 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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