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    dots Submission Name: Growing Updots
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    Author: mdsouza
    ASL Info:    15/F
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 161/101/20
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 230
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       growing up is so wonderful


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    dotsGrowing Updots
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    Right since I took my first breath,
    Till this very day,
    Mum and Dad have been with me
    And loved me all the way.

    Right since I took my first steps,
    Till this day, when I'm standing on my own feet,
    Mum and Dad have helped me face life
    And have made each moment so sweet.

    But growing up is so wonderful
    And independance is so sweet.
    On Sunday, walking home from church, ALL BY MYSELF,
    I felt like a sweet young lady on the street.

    It was raining very heavily that day,
    I twirled my umbrella gaily.
    I shan't forget how I got wet,
    I wished I could do it daily.

    As I walked home in the wind and rain,
    I remember doing the same,
    Years ago, splashing, with Mum, who'd scold,
    "You'll catch a cold. Don't play that game!"

    I can't believe how the years have passed
    And I've still got a long way to go.
    Oh, growing up is such great fun.
    And I'm glad to think I've got lots more.

    But I'll always have my Mum and Dad
    To help me on my way.
    Life is so beautiful,
    So enjoy everyday!




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    ||| Comments |||
      Yes, I shared your joy as I walked invisibly with you through the rain! Life can be very wonderful and nature, grand to explore as well. The wisdom in your writing tells me that you will do exceptionally well on your life's journey. I'm sending you smiles across all these miles and wishing you well today and always! :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-07-14 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      A very, very cute and very sweet piece of poetry... nifty, nice, gnarly ... bravo ... bravo ... bravo ...
    | Posted on 2007-04-14 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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