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    dots Submission Name: Here Comes the Bridedots
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    Author: Ratmeat
    ASL Info:    25/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 200/222/61
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 136
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 865



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       Satan likes to rhyme


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    dotsHere Comes the Bridedots
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    I'm married to the sound
    Of love and hate
    And to the high pitch squeal
    Over the P.A.
    To the smell of whiskey
    Leather and nickel
    Even the bodies that reek like a pickle
    I'm married to the taste
    Of complimentary beers
    Cheap vodka, sweat ,blood and tears
    To a humid Texas gravel torn road
    Lizards bask as a stormshattered
    Van hauls more than just a heavy load
    To an Ice slicked deathrap
    Highway through the snow
    And the traveling circus
    Risking all to get to the show
    I'm married to the pain
    With it's heroin-like stain
    And to the adrenaline from
    Those that make it all worth
    This streched out, pin cushion
    Locomotive of a heart

    Till death do us part






    Submitted on 2007-01-03 16:07:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love this poem. another original. keep up the good work, and keep dishin the poetry out. i love to read it.
    | Posted on 2007-01-07 00:00:00 | by shayla8911 | [ Reply to This ]
      Rock n roll! That is your destiny. Serve thor!Abraxas!Leviathan!Azazel! This record is the one...I can feel it in me bones!

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    | Posted on 2007-01-03 00:00:00 | by fryte | [ Reply to This ]



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