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I am not ashamed.

Author: TeeTee
ASL Info:    15/f/georgia
Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 30 /32 /22
Words: 265
Class/Type: Poetry /Being a Teen
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I am not ashamed.

I am a young mother
And I am not ashamed of it

You could say cruel things
But he is not the one to blame

If I could lay down for hours
Without stopping my partner
And knowing what could happen
Theres no use of panicking

Or having an abortion
The child is not the one to blame

I know in life we all make mistakes
So no one could judge me

I am happy for just the way I am
I am a loving mother
And proud of my child

When he grows up
I will proud to say
That my dear child
You was not a mistake

Because knowing that pregnacy could happen to me
I did not say no
And I did not stop it from happening

For someone to tell me
I should be ashamed of myself
And that I will burn in hell
For that sin
They should be ashamed of theirself
For saying that to me

With them being saved and all
They should know
That God loves us from who we are
No matter what we have did.

I am not going to admit that I was wrong
And Im not going to say that it was right

Because I love my son
No matter what was wrong
He deserved to be here
Every thing happens for a reason

Because I know Im not the only one to make that mistake.
And Im proud to say that I am one who isnt ashamed.

Submitted on 2007-01-03 21:25:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  All young mothers need to read this.

You care so much for your child that you basically said you would die for him.

Children do not ask to be brought into the world.Your understanding of that here shows you are a mature and a incredibly strong minded person.

I sense you wrote this as he was on your mind or in your view close to you, with the thought of the father and all the ignorance in the world that tries to bring you down when you are only trying to care for your responsibility.

This reminds me of a picture I saw of an African mother saying that her child was the light she protected that was getting her to overcome darkness.

The beautiful black mother would burn to see her child out of the fire first before she made any move.Which is translated that the mother would put herself in so much danger before the child could even experience such a thing, all out of love.

Tears can be shed but due to the existence of the child the mother will taste a great hope again.

Remain strong for him.God Bless you sista.
| Posted on 2011-03-12 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
  You are really strong... and you shouldnt be afraid. I'm glad you decided to keep your child and I hope your life has much joy. <3
| Posted on 2007-01-05 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngelKat | [ Reply to This ]
  i admire your strength. i agree with you. the child is not to blame and i'm glad u didnt get an abortion. in places your grammar could use some work but like u dsaid nobody's perfect but this comes pretty close to perfect in my book.
| Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]

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