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    dots Submission Name: Nature's Scenesdots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    61/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747/570/167
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 769
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsNature's Scenesdots
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    Such beauty lies before the eyes
    of those who care to see.
    All nature sings as rainbow flings
    its pastel palette free.
    How awesome lie the clouds in sky
    that float on breezes soft
    as sun shines bright with streaming light
    on birds that fly aloft.

    In Winter's snow, icicles glow
    with iridescent shine.
    In Springtime's rain, the bulbs regain
    their floral fresh design.
    Then Summer, warm, will soon transform
    the ripened fields of grain.
    When Fall arrives, its harvest thrives
    as part of nature's chain.

    In flow of days, nature portrays
    its seasonal routines.
    Such beauty lies before my eyes;
    I treasure all her scenes.





    Submitted on 2007-01-03 21:55:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      isnt it just gorgeous, the scenes that appear before us each season? truly beautiful, as is this poem. very descriptive and so pretty.
    an amazing piece of work here, i love it.
    michelle
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really great, Sharon! I'm a country boy, so this marvelous poem took me right back to nature and her seasons!
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Very wonderful. Its the best nature based poem I've ever read. I am going to add it to my faves, great write! I love the rhyming scheme, its very catchy, and your vocabulary was fresh. Sorry, but I can find nothing wrong with it!

    ~Kiki
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by precious_poetry | [ Reply to This ]
      This was truly an elegant piece! I am in awe of it! Your flow was inspiring and it captured my attention and love! ^_^ GREAT write!
    | Posted on 2007-01-03 00:00:00 | by ollie_wicked | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. I really love this poem. I can't even think of any criticisim. The word choice was perfect, the imagery amazing, it wasn't wordy or overwritten-an absolutley perfect nature poem.
    | Posted on 2007-01-03 00:00:00 | by A.L. Beirce | [ Reply to This ]


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