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    dots Submission Name: Born Is The Saviour Kingdots

    Author: mdsouza
    Elite Ratio:    4.57 - 161/110/25
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       Lowly shepherds came
    To see the glory of God's power

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    dotsBorn Is The Saviour Kingdots

    Born in a stable Oh, Christ our King
    You came for redemption for all.
    You dwelt amongst us Oh, Christ our King
    To save mankind from downfall.

    Angels rejoiced at your birth Sweet Jesus
    And shone a bright new star
    To proclaim joyfully with emphasis
    To the wise men from afar,
    "Come and see the Saviour,
    The Lord from wherever your are."

    Lowly shepherds came
    To see the glory of God's power.
    You are Lord and king of kings, sweet Jesus
    How wonderful you are.

    How good your heart is, Oh Christ our King
    How holy and innocent.
    To empty yourself for all
    Being God, great and magnificient.
    You were pure and humble, Oh Christ our king
    So sweet and pleasant.

    Rejoice, all the world, rejoice
    For born is the Saviour King
    He brings good news to the poor
    And cheer to the suffering.

    He brings the kingdom of God
    We are to keep it alive.
    With the spirit of Christmas in our hearts
    On God's Word, we'll thrive.

    In you we find life,
    In you we rejoice
    All nature praises you
    Joyfully in one voice.

    There's nothing more wonderful
    Than living in the Kingdom of God
    And nothing can bring us
    The joy we find in Babe Jesus, our Lord.

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      Very Very Well Said
    I owe everything I am and everything I ever will be to The Lord
    I was a Suicidal drug addict for 5 long years and it was 2 and a half years ago this month I invited The Lord into my Heart
    Instantly on that day I stopped doing drugs and finally realized why I am here
    I will never ever stop reaching out to others to show them how Beautiful Life is With The Love of The Lord guiding you forward
    I am making this a Favorite
    God Bless You for caring so much about others
    God Bless
    | Posted on 2007-11-16 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice nice!

    are you really 14? if your around that age, I'm really impressed..your a veryyy good writer especially for that age!

    I just see small errors..grammar that would be..you might wanna just go over it..some people are just stupid and don't understand..so I suggest you correct them!

    | Posted on 2007-06-20 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellent and inspirational poem, Megan! If only there were more thought and praise to the Lord, the world would be a better, kinder place!
    | Posted on 2007-03-18 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellent and inspirational poem, Megan! If only there were more thought and praise to the Lord, the world would be a better, kinder place!
    | Posted on 2007-03-18 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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