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    dots Submission Name: Teach Us To Praydots
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    Author: mdsouza
    Elite Ratio:    4.57 - 161/110/25
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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       Plant in me, love for my Redeemer,
    Which comes straight from the heart


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    Mama Mary, Virgin most pure,
    Teach me how to pray.
    And help me to be a better child
    Each and every day.

    Help me to be like you, dear Mother,
    The handmaid of the LORD,
    And help me to be like CHRIST, our Brother,
    Saviour and God.

    Show me the way, The Way of the Cross,
    By which, my Jesus passed.
    Plant in me, love for my Redeemer,
    Which comes straight from the heart
    Till I end my homeward journey, Which, everyday, I start.

    Oh! Mama Mary, please intercede,
    That we may be forgiven our every sin,
    To stop all of our evil deeds
    And be God's good children.




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      Oh my goodness Megan

    This comes straight from your heart and your heart is good....
    I have nothing to say about how you wrote this that is off or needs to be changed....
    It stands a lovely thoughtful read as is...
    .For a fourteen year old to write like you do i can only hope you always continue to write your thoughts down.... very nice Megan ...
    | Posted on 2007-06-15 00:00:00 | by deluka | [ Reply to This ]
      I love prayers and blessings because they come from the heart and soul of and to our Being. I encourage my child-like spirit and I particularly feel "IT" when I pray and look at all simply and with unconditional love.

    This is sincere and honest and provides the comfort of a simple yearning we all share.

    In my view I see us all as "IT's" children

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really precious, Megan! Nice work!
    | Posted on 2007-02-01 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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