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    Author: mdsouza
    Elite Ratio:    4.57 - 161/110/25
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
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       Composed this poem for my holiday project - "Maths". Please read 'No.s' as 'Numbers'


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    Maths is all about no.s
    Helping us to count.
    And they go on and on and on
    To an unimaginable amount!

    A child aged 3 once said to me
    That no.s start with 1, 2, 3.
    But I said, "No! That's very wrong.
    There are negative no.s too, you see!"

    No.s, No.s of every kind
    No.s, No.s even & odd
    Rational, whole, fractional, prime
    Positive, negative, composite ... GOOD GOD!!

    I once aspired to be a mathematician
    Now, I guess, it is a task too tall,
    For even a hundred years is less
    To learn about them all.




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      Oh, this is soooo wonderful and so very excellent, indeed! I loved it, loved it, absolutely loved it!! bravo.... bravo... bravo... michael
    | Posted on 2008-04-13 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      maths hahaha
    i wrote a song about maths once.
    but it was more to help my class add haha

    if seven plus three is ten
    then ten minus three must be seven
    and if seven plus three is ten
    then ten minus seven must be THREE!!

    haha!
    interestingly enough i am tutoring boys in maths at the school around the corner from me. these boys are aged 12 and cannot count backward in 2's. its like you are asking them to split the atom. somehow they have fallen through the gaps in the education system and as a result they know nothing...

    anyways yup... GOOD GOD is right...
    numbers numbers numbers...
    | Posted on 2007-10-24 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Very cute poem! Math was one of my favorite subjects in school way back then. Pen on, Sharon :-)
    | Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really cute and fun to read.
    Write on,
    Lanna
    | Posted on 2007-02-05 00:00:00 | by EmeRalDEyeZ5491 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hee hee! This is really very cute. Math was never my best subject so I can certainly relate to this poem. I am still learning about them all to this day! I think this is a fine childrens poem, very light hearted and fun. And when it comes to math and numbers, anything that is fun is a bonus!! Good stuff!

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2007-02-04 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol ...Cute, never read a poem about numbers before...I like math, based on logic and all, but you're right, too many numbers! ...anyway, nice work, keep it up!
    | Posted on 2007-02-04 00:00:00 | by drakoniss | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha! My sentiments exactly! Cute and enjoyable write, Megan!!
    | Posted on 2007-02-01 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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