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    dots Submission Name: from the mouth of the verbally abuseddots
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    Author: social circus
    ASL Info:    16/M/LA
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 17/57/36
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dotsfrom the mouth of the verbally abuseddots
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    remorsing the past i see nothing wrong with it
    but you.......sadistic mofo
    you try to conform me into what makes you pleased
    but really you just make me feel like i want to
    take the flag of this " great nation " and burn it to the fuckin ground. just be cause i dont live up to your standards so screw you.




    Submitted on 2007-01-04 04:00:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      remorse is good. it shows u have heart.

    I like the end.

    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      deepman really deep i feel ya
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by thewantedwords | [ Reply to This ]


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