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    dots Submission Name: Socksdots
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    Author: Localfreak
    ASL Info:    37, Maybe, Here
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 131/123/76
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 1076
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    Description:
       Well,m my baby jokingly said that this idea would be cool.
    So a couple of minutes later...


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    dotsSocksdots
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    I put them both in
    I swear it

    I layed them out just as one

    I put them together
    I know it

    I put them both there, in the drum

    Only one returned
    Damned it

    I should tack them together with a pin

    And what is this one here
    Don't understand it

    I've never seen one that colour before

    Is there a door in the back
    Of the washer?

    Where the socks go and play out somewhere

    They were both there
    I swear it.

    I guess it is just, lifes mystery

    Why the socks disappear
    In the washing

    Is it magic, or is it just me




    Submitted on 2007-01-04 08:16:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Your poem tumbles to the end of the load without any static that I can see. Murfy's law is in full effect without a doubt. I don't even know if tacking them together with a pin would make a difference in the end :) Great poeml. Thanks for the grin on my face.

    tagit
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by tagit | [ Reply to This ]
      Actaully laughing out loud! That was cute. And how true is that??? If it's not the wash, it's the dryer. Makes me want to crawl inside the machine and go for a spin myself!! See where I might end up (granted I'd never fit, and if I did I probably would never get out wihtout the fire departments help, but hey!!) LOL... I have to say it made me chuckle! I'm working on some pretty down stuff right now and that gave me just the right laugh at the right time... So thank you for that. :)

    Checking out some of your other stuff! Keep writing!!
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by nicklacymatthew | [ Reply to This ]
      (Laughing to myself and smiling).
    This was a very interesting write. Unfortunately, i don't have a washer but i do know the feeling of loosing socks very easily. To me, you wash them, hang them, dry them, pick them, put it on your bed, sort them and then pair them only to realize it's missing. Yeah, i get that too and i don't even have a washing machine.

    Still, lol. I could picture the socks going through the backdoor of the washer( if there is even one) and playing.

    Nice one.
    Take care....
    Irina
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by charmedidentity | [ Reply to This ]
      aha! I was just doing a joke about socks!Love it! Your baby served well as inspiration! Made me chuckle.

    LOLAVIE
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by lolavie | [ Reply to This ]
      No, its not just you. I think there is a little gnome who goes from house to house collecting sock. That is the only explanation.

    I have never read a poem about socks before. You see something new everyday, I guess. I loved the lightheartedness of this, it gave me a chuckle. These pieces are good for the spirit of everyone. I'm glad to know that I'm not alone.

    And hey, that odd sock was probably mine.

    Brightest Blessings,
    Crystal
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by lenotoire | [ Reply to This ]


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